I liked the way the images of the design idea 'escape from studio' were presented on the A1 sheet, and there was a clear progression of the idea from the scan image to the final idea. Some references to how the final idea was thought out (eg. literature references, other people's work, images etc) would have given more depth to the idea, as would references to previous projects (if relevant). The sketchup animation was great (though a little repeptitive) as a means to further explain the idea - making sure all the paths demonstated worked as you want will improve this further. The use of the A1 sheet was done well with a layout that worked well.
I liked the way the images of the design idea 'escape from studio' were presented on the A1 sheet, and there was a clear progression of the idea from the scan image to the final idea. Some references to how the final idea was thought out (eg. literature references, other people's work, images etc) would have given more depth to the idea, as would references to previous projects (if relevant). The sketchup animation was great (though a little repeptitive) as a means to further explain the idea - making sure all the paths demonstated worked as you want will improve this further. The use of the A1 sheet was done well with a layout that worked well.
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